Magazine Ad- Billy Sims BBQ

For my advertising class this semester, we had to continue using the same business that we did with the newspaper ad, and make a magazine ad out of it! So far, this is the first draft I finished for my Magazine Ad for Billy Sims Barbecue. Thoughts?

My first ad for Billy Sims, the newspaper one, is here: gronhatchat.deviantart.com/art…

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